Veil of Dusk A dystopian world - Reviews

Veil of Dusk A dystopian world
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This one came as a surprise to me...i was shocked that i actually liked this novel..i was expecting another overdone cliche but this is so much better...i was drawn in by the world building ...this universe has history that dates back more than a hundred years...the system that they have in place to respond to monster emergencies is realistic and the magic system seems to be well thought out ....in my opinion this one is the best in the batch
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Ima be honest just doing my daily stuff to get more spirit stones..............................................................................
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Woahhhhhhh.....This is the best!!!! This is so cool it's like a dream come true!!! I waited for days for this novel to be continued actively!! Thank you!!
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Granted I only read 5 chapters so my review should be read skeptically. They just did not hook me in. The only big positive I noticed was the grammer was great and I did not see any errors. Which is always a great thing. The negatives for me was the plot is very cliche and overused. In my opinion martial spirit cultivation is my least favorite of the “systems”. And I just did not like how the plot was progressing it seemed very predictable. The book was “cringey” at times. I just did not want to continue reading the book. But who knows, I do think many people could find enjoyment in this book. Maybe even love it, but this book is just not for me.
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Author please add a tag there those of us who don't enjoy this type of thing................................................................................................................................................
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"Hello my name is Edlyn Abela, first year, 15 years old. I apology again for my rude behavior and hope that you can forgive me." Xander watched her move her hands and something flashed for a split second in his eyes.

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(。’▽’。)♡ you can never be too sureMaybe someday they will be~?Thank you I will hope that you feel better aswell
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"Miss, how about you listen to your boyfriend and try it on? If it's not to your liking, there are other styles that might be suitable to your taste."
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I guess everybody would feel that way.
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'Torturing them into confession?'

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