u dialogue writing is very bad. there r too many huh oh uha etc. debates r also not to the point. the male characters r not strong enough n the main female is also a bit stupid with stupid dialogues n punch lines. the conversation btw her n her enemies r is also very hilarious which is also bad
Holy moly, what a great beginning of story. I can't believe both doppelgangers are twin sisters, that's an amazing twist. I am so curious to read further story about Victoria and Merry. Why are both sisters living apart?? great one.
