Vampire and Werewolf love story (web novel version) - Reviews

Maybe this book deserves a better score but thanks to a worse than MTL level of translation even 1 star is a lot for this. Webnovel please fix your translation and editorial work

I'm going to leave an honest review here for any new readers that are looking for a story with the best world building, greatest character development, and the finest dialog you've ever seen.This story... has all those things, but you need to give it some time. Character development starts around chapter 70, and  the world building isn't really satisfying till around the same chapter.However, to those who do give it a chance, thank you and please support this story in any way you can. I think it has some interesting arcs the later the story gets, and hope you all enjoy it  :)

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Need the raws!!! unless this is also from a original story without raw and just made up the the webnovel.Great story so far............................

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While the story is interesting and the premise is good, it has very little editing which makes it difficult to read. Additionally, while the author does take feedback, which is easy to notice after reading 200+ chapters, the older chapter are a mess and require significant rewrite.Essentially, while there is definitely improvement in the writing style, there are very few people that will be able to reach that point before giving up, which is the main reason this story will never see the top lists.For example, the other switches between story-lines between several chapters and you lose focus on their main character, while being forced to focus on characters the readers just aren't able to connect with because they disappear within a few chapter and have very little connection to the main story. While it was fixed, it still remains as a part of the story and is very difficult to gloss over. The only advise I can give to the author a complete rewrite for the first 200 chapters with serious editing and removal of filler chapters.

to be continued

That, obviously, is not a very good way to cultivate in long term, but it can boost your cultivation to something close to twice as fast in comparison to the overworld normal energy.

Yinok took a close look at him, she stood up instantly to leave the place but Gong Suk stood up too in a way he prevented her from going, yet,  she turned to another direction to leave. When he wanted to hold her back, his hand couldn't reach her even though she was close to him. Therefore he withdrew his hand amazingly.

"Wait!" cried Allen. "Stay with me!"

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