Unwavering World - Reviews

[Another shameless author found. Initiation of the wave of hate in progress.] Hello! Everyone I am the author of this novel. It's second try to write this novel. I want to share my imagination and practice my writing and English.The writing quality is probably low for now but it will be improved with time and effort. I hope you can help me with pinpointing the grammar, spelling and logic errors to make this story better. I am using Grammarly but it's basic version and it only shows the basic errors.  Thank you for your attention! I hope, all of us will gain something from this story. :)

Mc is control of everything but he also on edge of success and failure.A amazing hidden gem with no clichè stuff as far i have read.Give it try

It's a little fast paced in my opinion especially at the beginning. He doesn't have any attachment to his family figures and it seems a bit forced.The system is introduced too suddenly.Otherwise it's a very interesting concept. I put it in my library

Quite the good novel I fear. For I ran out of chapters to read ??

The moment the Goblin touched his weapon that was a rusty sword, Ren activated his ability and began to run as he dragged his sword across the floor and lifted a curtain of dirt.

Rebecca pouted and said while looking towards Robert "we are not kids dad and they were the bad people and everyone was stressed because of them so we just did what we can.. Daddy Did we really did wrong but we really just wanted to help you.. why is it wrong?"

"hmm"

Because, the Torturing Pirate's is a Pirate which came back from the Grand Line, and their strength is without a doubt can easily kill all of the Marine on the Fukis Island at that time, not just their strength, but also their quantity is 3 times than the Marine.

Gender Male

After taking look around the house, he returned to his room. Xaio Chen not only had the best cultivation method  that could also absorb starlight because in ancient time people used to absorb starlight making Qi as medium; but he found that his current body was fully suitable for that method. Now he started to cultivate,due to his physique of his he could only run a small meridian cycle as his body could not handle sudden surge in power.so he got out in lawn to practice some body tempering method. Xaio Chen found that this method had best effect because he could feel his body getting stronger,but the rate was still slow.

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Watching this curfuffle Steve couldn't believe that the human race was the predominant species on this planet. All it would take would be one vortex to another world to open up and they'd all be wiped out by giant ants or hamsters or something!