Until Dawn [Joshua Washington X Reader] - Reviews

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A child of a bad family trying his best to make the best of his new life. I wonder if we will ever meet his old family that he lost. So sad he lost so much and putting up with more as time goes on and doing everything to keep the peace. Def a page turner! * // *

The grammar is one of the biggest flaws of this.It would greatly help the author if they put their story is a word document or grammarly or etc before publishing, because the amount of grammar mistakes makes me think they made it in under an hour an were cutting corners.

I love it, I've been voting for this story every day and I'm definitely not disappointed. Thanks so much to the author, translator and editor

"Hi Atarah."

"Ibu ada apa....? Kenapa ibu seperti itu....? Apakah ada yang salah....?"

"Hey, Mrs. Fuentes, did Vic come with you?" I asked.

"Why?"

Chris once again dashed forward with a hay-maker punch. Arthur ducked under the arm and threw Chris over his shoulder. He slammed onto his back and Arthur kicked his elbow backwards. Chris winced with pain.

no need for 2 mc.........you have ruined the novel

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