I read the first 10 chapters and can I just say that I want to adopt Hannah as my little sister. She is just the cutest thing ever. I also like Jason and the fact that he is willing to enter a tournament which could potentilally harm him just so he can provide for his mother and sister. I find that really selfless and admirable. The writing quality could use a bit of work as there are some errors here and there, but not so much that it affects the story. Overall, great writing style, pace, and characters. Keep up the good work!