I Love the book I like books have crafting as a fouces, and even though the chapters are are short you make up for it in number of chapter published a week the only thing that would be better is if you upload more but I understand that is most likely not possible.
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Do not read this. There is essentially no ending. The author basically said, “I’m not writing anymore, go read my next story.” All of the plots, character development, etc. (developed over 700 chapters) were forcefully ended in a few chapters so he could create an absurd plot bridge to his next novel. If the author’s not even going to bother correctly finish his story, you shouldn’t bother reading it.
la premisa de la historia va bien pero hay varias cosas por mejorar:- la escritura no es muy buena, se entiende la idea pero la lectura no es fluida en general algunas cosas ni sentido tienen, en fin si pudiera mejorar la escritura ayudaría a la comprensión y mejoraría mucho la calidad de la historia-el sistema esta mu op, esto no es malo pero si el autor no controla un poco esto puede que la historia se arruine luego, es algo que suele pasar siempre que la trampa o poder es muy op, porque todo se vuelve demasiado fácil, termina siendo un cumplimiento de deseos, a menos que de eso sea la historia?dejando de lado esos 2 problemas la historia se ve buena aunque por el momento hay pocos caps entonces aun no hay una opinión clara
This is my favourite novel. I love the storyline and the characters, especially Lord Jiu! It is very entertaining and fun to read! Always looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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The only good thing about this novel is the number of chapters and update frequency. Thats probably the only reason ppl are reading it.Now onto the story review,the mc is a guy that has a multiverse system that has a qq farm from the novel as well as the shadow hack.What does he do with his cheats? Nothing he doesn absolutely nothing,im not kidding when i say nothing,its not like those mc that dont abuse their system,the mc literally does nothing with his cheat.He doesnt get strong at all in the first 100 chapters which is the harry potter world.What he does do is basically suck hp's dick and his friends all story long.Whatever he worked hard to get,guess what ? He becomes a tooth fairy and gets it for everyone with a soul in the story.He is basically the cheat for the hp world for everyone.Guess since he doesnt abuse it for himself,he might as well let others abuse it for themselves right? Now that if that isnt infuriating then we get the whole lets reveal everything to everyone trope,yeah he shows everyone what makes him special etc,why bother with the mind arts if youre gonna reveal everything lol We spend 100 chapters of him basically being the same as any other character in hp probably even worst,he isnt smart,he isnt talented he has a lot of problems but his system can fix it but he doesnt do so heh.Now we have the next world,a world with vampires and werewolf in it.Guess what he does in such a dangerous world where he can be killed in a moment's notice? He doesnt get supernatural powers from his system oh no he doesnt capitalize on it at all.He chooses to stay human and play mysterious only to almost die from a accident. Pathetic,did i mention he is scared of needles too? Overall this novel has a useless mc that is a doormat for every single character in every world,probably gonna be a doormat for the characters in the next world too.He is already trying to abuse his system so his vampire crush's problem could be fix rofl.
love the unique concept but sometimes status are difficult to see clearly but in all its interesting hope its does not have harem and all the generic cliché
