A captivating story, the mixed up he/she for the characters is a bit disjointing and would be great to see them edited so the story flows better. I do love reading stories with female characters who are strong, thanks ...
The female lead of this story is a doormat. I think she also has Stockholm syndrome. Just a heads up, the writer keeps the story in circles you would noticed that., it's ok to drag a story longer so long as it's not going on circles...