Unibook: Roses and Thorns – Just for Them - Reviews

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Good booed looking forward to the ending with hopes of twist and turns. I appreciate how it drew my attention because on the norm..i don't read books like this.

I like it, though it could work with some revision, however this dude need to use some serious punctuation, we get a paragraph with no full stops, and a few commas.

"As always." Aymelek responded simply, straightening her back, as she fixed her eyes upon one member of the staff who had long been a friend to her and Jericho. She was the one and only doctor that had proven herself trustworthy and reliable over and over again.

"Can I sit on your lap?" The tattoo artist put the mug of coffee he's been holding down and motioned for him to get closer before helping him on his wanted place and kissing his cheek loudly; he could spend days squishing and kissing those cheeks. "Can we take a shower together?" He leaned over the table to grab Milo who has been forgotten on his chair and hugged him close to his chest.

" ah aku kedalam dulu ya, ada yg harus aku kerjain " ucap Ye na yg merasa canggung berasa diabaikan.

"My name is Vran" The shepherd replied with a high pitched voice, he was still wary of the stranger in armor in front of him. "Nice to be you acqueintance, young Vran" The armored man had extended his hand towards the shepherd with a gentle smile on his face, after a moment of hesitation Vran responded with a shake of hands.

"Yes."

I burst out in complete anger, the room lights up in purple, all that light is coming from me. The clouds darken and gather, swirling in a huge circle , and that's when I started feeling something I couldn't stop. The world will end and my darkest secret is alive...

...

"Alex please follow me ill show your room , please feel free to ask me anything"

The air swishes loudly as the figure move its lips. The words forever vanished in this world.