Interesting concept, I'll admit. The main problems I have with it are the horrendous grammar, annoying/unnatural dialogues, and horrible handling of the third and first-person rules (stop switching!).The best thing about this novel is the update stability. If you can turn off your brain and get down to reading, you'll have plenty of chapters as you follow the protagonist.Still, I don't recommend this.The characters are typical of what you'd expect from a horny **** writing a dual cultivation novel, and there isn't exactly a world built.Don't read this, save your eyes!
