Unfair Fate - Reviews

I'm wishing for a good world background explanation but not too many details, can fill that in later on into the novel.Clean and ****** Realms. Easy to understand and follow.. Not too overbearing of a main character PLEASE. Awakening 3 lifetimes worth of memories and if he still acts like some young impulsive guy I swear.. Past 2 and current lifetime. 3 worlds. Many stuff to make up on. Many stuff to relate to. Many stuff to make something out of nothing. That's what I meant to say.

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just as a fellow author i am i give this novel 4 because of the new world and the creation the author did.but ?the story is not so good i will say that as i also a writer i will say you should do something new story. like a normal family not the revenge  type story. many readers readed the revenge type story  thats the fan fiction  is so popular this day.creat some new story. man not like this here every one can guess what your story main thing. like this title the book as a world overload.right most of readers will think about a Finally a different story. butyou just killed by writing your story a revenge with tragic story. where mc try to claim the power of the top to take revenge. and in this process  you make mc life harder and giving him a ton of luck etc to survived the dead like scenario. this type of novel is all over the net. so do sometimes new. like the age of adapts if you read the novel. you will find that start is different from most of the other novel. except the reincarnation details that the author copyed it from the other novels. the rest are different and so does the Storyline  is Also. the mc of this story  almost died if not for his quick Brain.yes there is luck on mc but the author of age of adapts didnt put much except on 5 occasion of the entire novel. this all i have to say man. your novel had great potential  if not for your revenge with tragic background and the mc lot of lucks.....

(Kai)

estou ansioso pelo proximo capitulo

thanks of the chapter

                                                           The End

          While looking for clues towards finding the village chief daughter, Daniel had also been killing goblins. Its been almost two hours since he accepted the quest, but still no clue towards her location.

"That's, great. I'm proud of you." I held her hand.

  All my vision at that moment clouded, but the strange thing is that I did not feel any pain, none. 'I really died, hehe, now I can see my parents' I thought.

I quickly calmed myself down.

Ohhhhh good l....what a fantastic book..