Unexpected Travel Into The Omniverse. - Reviews

ok this is really good one not the best but still it is good. but i kinda feel that it has alot of untapped potential in it. like there is alot of ways this story could take turn and I hope this works out. you should also work on the updates man they are all over the place.but all in all this is good

Go to ONE PIECE AND GO GET The Baku Baku no Mi is a Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to eat anything. The eaten items can then be merged into and manifested from the user's body or be combined to create something else. It was eaten by Wapol AND THE The Gasha Gasha no Mi The Gasha Gasha no Mi is a non-canon Paramecia-type Devil Fruit that allows the user to telekinetically disassemble objects and reassemble them into whatever they please, making them an Assimilation Human (合体人間 Gattai Ningen?, FUNimation: "Combinable Human"). It was eaten by Douglas

Potential don’t drop but how many world would he go and also you have to remember all cartoon or kid tv show are op like sponge bob literally destroyed the universe in a matter of second and also saint seiya or ben 10. But also sacred gears of dxd mix with the cloths of saint seiya is equal to op equipment.

Also should check fandom wiki about powers.

Also you should read battle accros the Omni verse an d many other fanfic and also annihilation maker fanfic.
Good luck

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o really like the story the update is a bit of problem but other than that this is good and worth reading. i hope he just doesn't drop it tho.

I only read a couple of chapters but it's not to my liking. Almost every sentence is written like a new paragraph. Then there are missing punctuation marks. Sometimes it's hard to understand who is thinking or saying what. And connection between characters is discovered too late in my opninion.

updated please