Undying Martial System - Reviews

Really don't know why so many people are giving such a low rating just because of one vaguely racist comment, which had already been removed from the story. I wonder if some of these people had actually read the story before they reviewed or liked the reviews saying that this novel is racist and decided to ditch the novel.Personally, I feel this is an interesting read. I could see a lot of potential in the story and character development, and I really like the comedic way the story is delivered. I feel that this book is much better than some other books that get selected and I really hope to see what happens next in the novel.

would have reported this **** for corruption if i could, this novel wasn't even selected from the trial reads and yet ignoring everything here it is, i don't care if its a good book or not for everyone wondering, this **** is taunting whoever voted in trial reads, idc if this review gets deleted, this **** is either gonna get bombed more or is gonna fall in obscurity anyway. this was for sending a mssg for whoever is the asshole in the back "FUCK YOU".

looking forward to this.cnwokeekiddndwokeepdjdkdoem3rojfsoeoernfkeojrjfifirieokemckforpeljfjfoeolwmjofoemkwodrjjtoformeoeodjkfkepw0kdm

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This is so funny!! I really liked it, its well written, and the plot is smooth and interesting. I like the luck aspect, there are not many.

[Failure: A thousand Lashes, Attention of the church and King Wimbledon, Longsong counterattack]

King John: Ohh! Sorry kid well I'm not the person you're looking for kid but my daughter.

"Whatever the reason may be, it doesn't change the fact that there are demons threatening the lives of our civilians. We of The Defense Force will soon dispatch squads of officers to patrol the area surrounding the walls and maintain stability and safety to our city. You have my word."

Ketiga wanita paruh baya itu merasa diabaikan, akhirnya Rina -- si pemilik butik segera menghentikan keromantisan pasangan sejoli itu,"Hemmm... Maaf Tante menginterupsi kemesraan kalian. Tapi Tante hanya ingin memberitahu bahwa kalian bisa melakukan fitting terakhir untuk baju pernikahan kalian seminggu sebelum acara pernikahan kalian."

If I had known, then I wouldnt have ask youhe resolutely thought in his mind. He also cant help but think if there was someone else in his place what their reaction would be.

"Waeyo?" dengan cepat Sehun berbalik dan melingkarkan tangannya dipinggang Yoona. "aku tanya kenapa? Kau harus menjawabnya dulu." tambahnya, menatap Yoona lekat. Tatapannya kembali membuat gadis itu terpaku. "ah, aku baru ingat. Tadi aku tidak jadi menciummu. Apa aku lakukan sekarang saja?" godanya dan berhasil membuat Yoona menjadi gugup.

"From all the knowledge I can muster, I can say that we have transmigrated to another timeline where we don't exist. But for me I am happy that we all can survive meet together again even though if it is a different space and time. You guys shouldn't forget that we were supposed to die on that plane explosion."