Undressed by the Half-Beast Prince - Reviews

1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra Arroyo Lane, Albuquerque, New Mexico, 87104. This is my confession. If you're watching this tape, I'm probably dead– murdered by my brother-in-law, Hank Schrader. Hank has been building a meth empire for over a year now, and using me as his chemist. Shortly after my 50th birthday, he asked that I use my chemistry knowledge to cook methamphetamine, which he would then sell using connections that he made through his career with the DEA. I was... astounded. I... I always thought Hank was a very moral man, and I was particularly vulnerable at the time – something he knew and took advantage of. I was reeling from a cancer diagnosis that was poised to bankrupt my family. Hank took me in on a ride-along and showed me just how much money even a small meth operation could make. And I was weak. I didn't want my family to go into financial ruin, so I agreed. Hank had a partner, a businessman named Gustavo Fring. Hank sold me into servitude to

Great novel which is to be expected by the author there is humor, action that you might expect from a good novel. The MC is meticulous and develops step by step. overall its an awesome read.

it's just too simple.the character isn't consistent.there is no thrill.the writing is of an amateur who actually tried.i read till the guy reached floor 7 and then it got cringey, boring and predictable. The fight scenes aren't really fight scenes, it's just the mc doing things.

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I'm already captivated with the plot like Whoa-I love itttt! You're writing style is detailed and I can imagine each scene in my head which helps understand the plot. ????

This is a great combo of Action and Kingdom (well, shop) Building, with a lighter theme. Well, so far. The MC doesn't have any real antags yet, except his bickering with Yun and the System. Their back and forths are great. I feel this novel's main draw is not placed solely on Jin's back, he's got a good selection of Supporting Characters, some of which are clichés (unavoidable as there has been almost every type of character) that move the story. And you get to see their views and a small glimpse of what makes them want to visit his store. Even if it's for band name clothes. This, so far, is a novel with great supporting cast that manages not to overshadow our panda, a decent relationship between Jin and his system, and light comedy. And we are definitely not left wanting on those action scenes.Overall, a favorite novel, amongst translated and originals.

I'm going to start directly: I read all your chapters already out at once because I really appreciated your idea. You have a really good writing style that improves throughout your writing. I have no negative criticism to make of you apart from that your characters are not described enough... But... I wonder if you are not doing it on purpose... Because, we notice in your last chapter that your character is very think about it so I'm almost sure that you're deliberately not describing certain characters too much to do it later (that's why I'm giving you 5 stars, hoping I'm not wrong). Anyway, Bravo, I'm happy to support a small novel creator, I hope he becomes popular!

White Land School's land is overgrown with bamboo weeds and shrubs, besides banana trees and others plants. That morning the wind blew from the north quite loudly causing the sound of rustling leaves. Not far from the school housing, Mahesa Wulung sat on a large rock. He was daydreaming about the city of Demak. In there he lived with no short of happiness, have many friends which friendly and close. Remembering he often sailed with his boat roaming the ocean. His soul of the sailor feels like calling him to back to the ocean. In here he did not see the vast sea, where the water sparkled in the sun, but only the plants and mountainous land merely, mountainous with the curves of the valley and steeped in steep slopes. In the middle of his reverie, sounds of human steps approaching were heard from the side of his seat.

I looked up at Chloe whose pretty grey hair now had bloody red highlights. The laptop in her hand twisted and useless. Excitement filled her face, as if she hadn't just killed several people. Or she had enjoyed it. Even if they were already dead, shouldn't she feel something? I guess you never know people huh.

I got dressed up, as soon as i was done i heard Thomas knocking on the door. I quickly grabbed my bag and went downstairs. "Hey Thomas" I said to him happily, He did quickly responded "So, you ready to go to school?". I nodded with a smile on my face. I locked the door and went on our way.

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