undertaker x Multiverse - Reviews

Gotta say not what I expected, I expected a kingdom building like RTW, but instead of trying to immerse the reader in this world, he keeps giving his opinion and history lessons, nearly 50% of it is this stuff, the actual story or plot is not immersive and author keeps monologuing and yet uses various rare units of measures to make it 'immersive'. Apparently mc has a system, but what it does, what it is, there is no explanation, mc just knows how to use the system(this part he doesn't monolog), I have not read a lot, so just a heads up.

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This was the First Online novel I ever read, I would highly recommend it! The MC gets a Grandpa in a ring, becomes a Magus and a warrior at the same time and then proceeds to become the 2nd most OP person in the entirety of existence!

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Aster stood in place pondering over his options, 'I can do anything. Maybe, I can help those trapped here.'

"I have source Summer. I won't be the king of the vampire world and the president of the human world for nothing." Sabi niya na parang nababasa niya ang aking isipan.

"Oh, Hi Mark."Nicholas as the suckup he was greeted him.

Walking around the whole house, even though I tried all of the windows with the key, none of them budged.

Rias diligently sucks in the tip to clean me up as for the remainder of that day I taught Rias how to give proper blowjobs as she passed out from drinking my cum multiple angles as I give her leaking pussy a good fingering for a minute and tasted the flavor as it was rich and begging for cock

Some people said they can't use the server link to join so I added it in novel description .

ruby "so when are we going wolf cause that bus isn't going to sit there forever right?" many were confused and ynag ask "what do you mean where is this bus?" then ruby stood there then understand that they standing in the meddle of people and her friends but wolf finds it funny cause she matured but still a child that she was only thinking of wolf and not paying attention to the other around her which is very funny to watch and to which ruby face look red as her hooded cloak cause she looks like a forgetful child and told her friend she was more mature and now embarrassed so she went close to and hug tightly to wolf for dear life but wolf pick her up and sit her down on his broad shoulder then let go to which ruby sit there happily

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