Undercover Heart - Reviews

SHAMELESS! Quickly grovel under this Grandfather feets and i might spare you or I'll chop your four limbs and shatter your dantians?????

At first for the first 23 chapters i dislike the Mc alot but after chapter 23 it became fuckin entertaining n ruthless ly awesome hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

Typical cardboard MC for your middle school readers to self insert in. I can't decide which is worse, cardboard MCs or "righteous" MCs. I guess people voted for this because it sounds similar to another popular novel but look at what we got, Lord Xue Ying didn't die for this.

Don't be fooled by the high rating, it's because the author can review his own novel and give it 5 stars any number of times.The novel is just another crappy fanfic, with the MC basically jerking off to FY, and not doing anything interesting. The grammar is tolerable, which isn't saying a lot. The author's exposition is telling us what we already know, instead of adding anything new to the table. And the author's take on FY is awful.TLDR: Don't read it if you're expecting a decent fanfiction.

Upon seeing this, Paolo didn't hesitate. He launched again [Wind Blades] without hesitation and aimed them towards the bandit leader.

[okay]

"It's okay I am happy your alive. Should we go back now?" I look at her and then the Direwolf corpse. "Yeah but I need to take this corpse with me for food and material. I also need to grab my shovel and axe I dropped back there." I point behind me. She looks behind me into the darkness and then at the Direwolf corpse. "It is totally dark and the corpse of this Direwolf should weigh around a thousand some pounds. Can't we get them in the morning? That way we can bring the truck here and drag it." I look at her and totally forgot that I have become superhuman. "Haha, no. If I leave my stuff out here some Goblins might snag them. As for the corpse let me worry about it." It seems she is still used to her strength so her improvement wasn't as drastic as mine. Though I did kill my first Direwolf solo. She looks a little confused, "Okay I will wait here for you." I smile and then walk into the darkness. I should make some bola's to snag the Direwolves feet from under them that way I can kill more of them and improve. I return to where I stabbed my axe and shovel into the branch and jump up to grab them. This time my initial jump was 9 feet. Nice improvement. I jump back down and walk back to the Direwolf and Rosy.

They stabbed it until it resembled a porcupine with black rotten blood streaming out of the wounds.

Regarding the pelts, since they need lot of time to process them, I kept only the best ones, the rest is just to practice skinning.  The carcasses were left them for the nature to make it's course...I mean...There's corpses everywhere, it' won't make any differences some more.

Xiao Yun was covering her mouth with both hands as she also stared at her son with wide eyes. "But… that is… what… I can't…" Needless to say, Xiao Yun was so shocked that she couldn't even form words.

Few days later he learned that I was pregnant and he rained on me with kicks and blows only God knows how that baby stayed alive.The pregnancy kept me busy, I listened and wrote every change every feeling, I communicated and the baby obeyed it was like he was listening.

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