I am also sorry this book went on for so long, it was my first attempt at writing and I learnt and improved a lot so heads more guys, more amazing stories on their way...️
Now this is what I like, the story is simple yet effective the emotions of characters can be felt easily and the author had done a great job portraying scenarios
Interesting character plot. I like how Larry is Calm and reads the situation quickly. I'm just confused of the character's looks but apart from that everything else is cool. Keep writing author San.
So far I'm really annoyed with the story. The mc is stupid. The things he says as well as his actions annoy me so much for some reason. He has a weak personality that makes me feel like he will constantly be pushed around. There are also several Grammer errors although it's readable and not nearly as bad as some of the stories on this app.
A truly cultured text with nice characters and world building. No ntr Certified. Definitely a fantastic read from a new author. Thanks for this great text author
What an amazing story from Jordan Silver. I like all her books. The best part is that it is a part of the Squad Family. So we will meet Lyon, the Seals, Mancini and my favorite three little genius Girls.
In the distance, they could see four small, distinct figures in the ocean and they were clearly where the ice-shells were coming from, launching them from over the massive distance between the bridge and them.
Ya Zhouyue eyes darkened to the point of complete darkness, his face devoid of emotions, and his aura was so oppressing that this besides him began to vibrate and shatter.
