Unchaining Alice - Reviews

Love the story keep dem chapters coming.…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………………………………..

this is gem.. i hope this get pick..didiididkdkdkdkdkdkdkdkdidjdidjdjjvfmrnrnrfididjdjjddndndnjdnsndieirnfnfnflskejrjfjddndmsksksso3iess

Verei, heid ler a historia e  espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.

So far, so good. I can say it seems to be fairly standard as litrpg goes. It's one of those regressor types where the MC was a top pro player and then starts over again with a new character. I do like the way the author keeps the mystery of the MC's real life going..revealing it bits at a time. Though the focus is mainly on the game world...I can already tell there is going be a huge blow up with real life that will probably cross over the game world as well.

This is a pretty typical cultivation novel.  Again, there are some tropes I don't really like - uninteresting love interests, backstabbing sect and clan dynamics, and an MC who hasn't really shown a great deal of mental development so far.  So in some ways this makes me wonder where this story is going.There are a couple of things I do like.   I like the cheat the MC has.   So far it's an interesting add towards his physical development but not towards his cultivation abilities.   There's definitely some mystery surrounding this and I'm certainly curious to see how this develops.   The other thing I like is that the chapters are relatively long for what that's worth.I guess overall I'd be interested in following this story if it got chosen, as long as the story doesn't fall into a loop of repetitive plot elements.

I don't mind you pausing one story to further a second one, but please don't get so invested that you drop the former. I'm expecting great things from both infinity world online and apex system

Found this by coincidence while author recommended reading my story.The story itself is not like the usual, what's more interesting for me is how the author portrayed time with the flow of the plot. CREATIVITY LEVEL is great , minimal grammar lapses and good choice word construction.Cool that author has already planned a couple of chaps. Looking forward to this. Keeping this to my library. :)

I like this story. It is not only written well, it plays like a movie as you read cos the whole thing just flows.If you love sci-fi books, don't miss this one ?

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More to life than staying in your own comfort zone? BS! What’s wrong with lying in bed all day doing nothing but reading webnovels?         

Peak fiction fr. Apple chan world building is dope.

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