UnbrokenChainENG - Reviews

I like your story though at first i didn't like it based on reviews. it is decent story. though i feel sometimes i feel you are trying to make things too complicated at times. another problem in my opinion is your slow pace and due to which it can't be enjoyed in this webnovel chapter format. Yours is i think something to be read in bulk like after 5 or 10 chapter. Overall i like it. I think it is right balance somewhere between extremes of all wish fullfilment stuff where everyone worships mc and the other extreme where anything and everything goes wrong for mc. Yours characters also  feel like people though mostly shitty though that is mostly real life things i guess. Everyone isn't a shounen character. though sometimes it goes too grimdark, i guess. Like everyone has something dark about them them. Also you should gauge your story every now and then between realistic stuff and entertainment for which most people come to read a novel. Too much wish fulment type novel get stale pretty soon but too realistic also have problem of not always being entertaining. Though best of luck.I will follow your writing.

With those numbers he can throw down a seed of a giant oak and it will mature and die in days not to mention regular plants, why do they even choose these trash?

Why does the novels clearly from China used english names which is infuriating?----------‐----------------zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This series is medicore. Mc  z op talent and go to world with system. His op talent  help him rise in ranking level .....He  was strong  and lost his brain...Medicore series  z op  mc. If you bored  you can read for killing time..

I really enjoyed the first chapter its kind of new style to the other i have read before keep up the good work i hope you don't stop with your work cause i kind of want to know what will happen in the next chapter

For the next hour, I looked like a complete idiot. I tried every super power I could come up with. I tried to lift my bag just my staring at it. I almost burned myself trying to control fire. I even tried jumping off the second floor to see if I could fly.

"Hufff, how this actually happen?"

Dinesh points at the infants ward "To take a look at his niece and nephew? It was the only way to divert him".

Sebastain thoughts: Damn system couldn't have been nice enough to warn me who the hell made it? Whoever did I curse you and your whole family.

Another Example would be Charging Ability with a another ability that requires concentration and time. As Charging would be full frontal attack with simple sequences and attacks. While the other requires needing to concentrate without any distraction to gather energy and power into a certain spell or attack. These two cannot combine, unless the Spell are short and controllable without the need of a chant to call upon a powerful attack.

"so we're going to the club at 8:30 and I guess we're gonna stay until 11". I nodded my head and looked at the time 6:30. I went to my bed and slept for an hour.

"Dad....."