Un-seasoned - Reviews

This is a good book . The chapters need to be longer . Went through several chapters that could have been one chapter . The chapters I'm talking about are the ones at the Hales , they were drawn out into 19 chapters and could have 2-3 chapters . This is ridiculous after I use my coins that I just purchased I'm deleting this app it's not worth the time or money . In the past week I've read 5 on my 6th physical book . I think I'm going to stick with them .

A wonderful and well-written novel. The grammar was great as the sentences flowed nicely! As for the story, it was all well thought and unique compared to most novels on this site. This uniqueness would definitely pay in the long run. Hope you the best, the novel would be added to my library.

I am greatly enjoying the writing style of this story so far! The protagonist/narrator is funny and definitely feels like the age he's described as. The silver haired girl is strange but intriguing. I look forward to continuing to read through this story!

This story is really good, there are a lot of new plots every chapter and overall the design is really nice! I think this is the second best story I've ever read, behind I only level up, I suggest reading this!

This story has an interesting premise, and after reading a few chapters so far, I can say that I like the direction it is going in. There aren't many mistakes, and the ones that are there, it'sminor. I also like the MC of the story, the concept, and the setting, especially the world building. Overall, it's going well so far, keep up the good work and good luck!

This book is absolutely hilarious. I was cracking up on the first few chapters, the premise is quite unique as well, plenty of potential. The writing quality is quite high, very few grammatical mistake and a solid vocabulary. Definitely one to watch for the future!

They first proceeded to their suite to change into their bathing suits. When they arrived, they were more amazed when they got to see their room. Eun Young booked a Royal Suite for their stay. It was the most expensive type of room in the resort. Everything in the suite was designed to cater a VIP and one of its distinguishing features is the magnificent view of the ocean! They could even watch the sun rise and set from their balcony!

Ughhhh... It was Tuesday. Nicole HATED Tuesdays. Tuesdays were the days when she had to see James. Ever since the incident two weeks ago, she dreaded their interactions, though she adored his appearance and demeanor.

First Day

Karna aku selalu bekerja dan belum pernah mengambil cuti, jadi 'ua' datang kepadaku dengan sebuah kertas petisi dari seluruh anggota timku.isinya kurang lebih memintaku, tidak tidak itu lebih seperti memaksaku untuk berlibur. hasilnya waktu luangku sebulan ini sudah keterlaluan banyaknya. Saat saat aku sarapan di café rumahku yang lebih sering tutup dari pada buka itu, tiba tiba datang seorang wanita cantik dengan koper silver di tangan kanannya dan sebuah tas yang kelihatanya sangat bermerek. Auranya terasa sangat familiar. aku yakin kami pernah bertemu, tapi aku tak ingat kapan dan, dimana.

Payton had to think. Then it clicked. "Bora-Bora?"

"Nggak kok, menurut gue dia unik," timpal Irfan sambil menyuduh minumannya. Ku anggap itu semua pujian, lagian hanya mereka yang selalu ada untukku. Suduh cukup bagiku mereka tidak pernah menjauh.