Uma Linda Luna Após a Rejeição - Reviews

我的天呐，Ye Qiu帅爆了！他的中文名是 叶秋 吗？这是我看过的最好的小说，听说在中国这本小说已经完结了。请问要怎么才能看到更多章节呢？哪怕是中文版本的也好。请起点中文版也一起上架谷歌商店吧。每天一章的速度太慢了，完全赶不上我读的速度。哦上帝，我简直要窒息了。从此Ye Qiu一生粉，作者简直是天才！

all I can say is, good concept but lackluster writing. The 'owner of a magical shop' troupe is interesting but the phrasing of the words and grammar pulls one out of the storyI really like the concept so if you want me to edit some chaps for free hit me up on discord: Daoist RedSnow#2180

I really enjoy this book. It is so well done that it wants me to come b ack for more and more. I just can't stop reading this that is how good this book is.

read 25 chapters. I've always loved and been a fan of yandere novels so it wasn't a big surprise to check this one out. in addition the mc just dumped his fiance and now anticipating how she's gonna regret it is oddly satisfying. anyways it was worth my time reading. keep working hard author sama and don't drop this masterpiece.

Ok.  Grammar and general writing skills not great.   Dialogue and characters need a lot of work.  Good start for author,  defenatly lots of potential, this just isn’t there yet.  Characters are empty without any traits or quirks.

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Pretty good and interesting. Until it wasnt. In the early chapters we saw the mc being cool headed and making reasonable choices for quicker progression. But then we got to pest. The random curse the mc seemingly knows nothing about despite being some powerful demon the gods had to kill. He doesn't even know how to get rid of a curse. Even worse is the fact the mc becomes extremely childish and cant seem to ignore a insult. He starts gnashing his teeth and whining because of a voice in his head that he should be able to deal with.. but cant for some apparent reason.

Warning for those thinking of reading, stopped at chp 29. The mc is mate bonded to a spoil abusive princess, basically he's like her dog that she can kick around because of it.If I knew this before hand I would never have read it, but since I didn't, I read a bit more than I normally would because of the potential I thought it had if only the author didn't decide to go in such an annoying direction.I may check back in the far in the future to see how it turns out once that distasteful element is gone.

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