Twisted Fairytales - Reviews

Such a wonderful story .... well done author

Werewolves are back to being amazing in this one. This book goes a long way to  undo the damage the Twilight series did to werewolves. The story is interesting and engaging, the characters are well done, the author did well.

ok so quick transition for MC is nice and while there's a fast growth for him it doesn't feel misplaced. incredibly excited to see how things go from here as I'm on chapter 38

Writing Quality?-Since the writer is creating a Orginal Novel be wary of words being mixed up like "he" or "her". So just look at the rest of the sentence and you'll get the general idea. Also some parts when hes explaing some general infromation thats needed may seem like too much sometimes, however keep in mind its the authors passion showing through. Otherwise its pretty good qaulity.Stability of Updates?-So far no general hiccups. Keep in mind authors in the beginning may burn out. I dont want that here but its a reality.Story Development?-The author has done a great job of mixing both present information, future possiblites, and potential relationships that we as readers should keep in mind. Character Design?-The MC is develping slow and steady based off his upbringing and adventuring into the world. Nothing off putting like annyoing arrogance, cold blooded killing machine, pansy, however some people might not like the amount of romance introduced already. Keep in mind by Ch 72 theres 1 for sure harem member, 1 in the process but will take a lot of time to come around, and lastly 1 more that has her own interesting qualities. The MC isnt a pervert, but a young horny dude that wants to be with beautiful women if given the opportunity. While some novels create female leaders with no substance this one dosent. No close friends yet since most people his age are too weak.Lastly, while one of the tags say Overpowered its mainly because its still in the beginning and the author has givin the MC a strong foundation few can match in his current realm so there arent many strong enemies yet to match him so be patient if thats a issue.World Background?-Th author has done a good job contrasting his present situation, the plethora of galaxies out there, and how the MC will get there step by step. Not too much is given beyond the scope of his current realm as that isnt needed yet so sit back and enjoy the ride.That leaves 1 potentailly MAJOR issue for some readers.. why am I putting it way down here? Well its the MC raping a potential love interest (Not the one in the beginning) and while I would not read any novel that has rape there is one exception. Its where the MC is forced to have sex with a women after being given a power boost to offset the rapid rise. This situation if done right is where the MC feels remorse towards his actions and is willing to take responsibilty then I am letting it slide assuming it wont happen again. This novel is the execption. Others Ive read that do the same are "Ancient Godly Monarch" & "Chaotic Sword God". Both great novels that have a rape sence.If youve come this far get to it and read!!

Haven't read it yet but I will now, I just want to say this here.... MC's background is similar to mine except the last 2...... 1. I don't live in an apartment, but my dad's house (May he rest in peace) And 2. I haven't had a girlfriend since I was 24 (I'm going 34)

hmhm I'm not quite a good critique nevertheless take my world with a grain of salt or whatever condiments you have First of all , sheees that started in a formal  way like a proper review hehe pffft ,nah I'ma just say this novel is quite good though there's currently only about 40ish chapters , the updates is also considerably fast , and the writing quality is good , and the story is still developing well enough to make me emersed in reading well not really emersed emersed but it's up there is the emersed scale ⚖️ so do go on with the story writer nim l'ma be just watching,waiting,and reading of course , keep up the good work ya got

This is a really great novel. I like this concept much more than teaching system ones, this novel is for building an academy as a whole, not only just for being a teacher. The concepts on which he powers up is also very nice and allows him to be knowledgeable instead of other novels where they don't know the underlying concepts.

Stat points: 55

"Well, there is only one of them now," Ichigo said with a smirk confusing all of them. "There is no way those two could survive those shots I fired, I made sure of it," Ichigo said as he pulled his two pistols out from his coat and placed them on the table. Before anyone could say anything to what Ichigo just said the telephone int he corner of the room started to ring. No one said a thing or moved a muscle all they did was stare at each other for a few seconds before Ichigo got up with a smirk on his face and made his way to the phone. "Hello," Ichigo said as he picked up the phone.

Lin Xun was shivering on the ground, had New Mulberry City not been exposed to an immortal in the past, he would have doubted his own eyes.

Nero caressed her face and planted a light kiss on his wife's forehead. She slowly opened her eyes when she felt her pillow was somewhat tensed and getting hard. A wet fluid dampening her forehead.

Stella kept silent and didn't speak throughout the conversation among her best friend and Ex-bestfriend. She sometimes think that where everything went wrong and they grew apart. She couldn't exactly point out and Ira wasn't willing to speak about it. Maya their middle school friend had told her that she was partially responsible in all this but never mentioned anything else and said to me to figure it out myself.