Twin Soul - Reviews

This novel isn't completed yet. I am still slowly releasing new chapters. This novel was published by EMP-publisher and I don't know why they marked it as completed. Thank you for continuing to support this novel.

I don't think this is a terrible idea, and the story development is okay. However, I can't get past the fact that the grammar in this story isn't very well developed. I know not every author can hire a proofreader for every chapter, but this webnovel from the start honestly feels a little rushed on the author's part. If you're the type of person that's okay with some bad grammar, this could be an okay story. I just can't focus on the story when my immersion is being constantly broken by present and past tense switching around, when in narration only past tense should be used unless referring to a character asking himself a question about his/her future. I really feel like the idea for this webnovel is great, but when the other reviews say it is childish, that's probably because it feels like something a teenager might have written at times.

So, if ur like me these reviews don’t mean anything to you, but seriously this novel is incredible, it’s hard to think of a comparison, but it’s the same sort of genre as vampire system or other novels like that. The world building is quite nice, the writing quality has been impeccable, I find myself never hating any character, with character development definitely present. Most importantly, though towards the start there are a lot of time lapses, it’s done in such a way that it never starts to drag on, it skips most of the mind numbingly boring, 30+ chapter school life filler, and focuses on major events. All in all, it is really good, and I’m trying to think of a way to get others to read this lol... I’d just say this is an incredible novel, plz try it out.

I think the only problem with the is the biggeSt deal breaker the passing is HORRIBLE i mean itS baaaaadddd and hard to understand ...........

Very nice story, It is very interesting how the plot might turn out, suspenseful enough to keep you wanting the next chapter. I am not a big fan of romance , so I think it is fine without much like it is in this novel. lots of fights are good. it is nice to see that the mc has a personality and is not just strong, although his personality does bite him back some bits.

This novel is published through EMP and I couldn't tag more than one category. Other tags included Action, Adventure, Vampire, Romance, Angel, Demon, and a little bit of Comedy. This is a long novel that I have been writing by putting all my heart and brain into it. However, I know it is not perfect and hopes it will be good enough to keep your interest. One thing I can promise you, there will be no filler chapters! All chapters were part of the main story.

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this is stupid and childish i feel embarrassed that i thought this was going to be a good novel it is complete and utter trash its just so bad just drop the book your just embarrassing yourself

I'll br honest, I haven't read all that much. but I've read enough that I'm confused on the very basis of the story. and its also probably not a good sign when the names of the magic change in the literal synopsis. its definitely Interesting, the character from what I've seen is fine and the world is fairly fleshed out. but its not something g id be willing to sink more time into.

I just need you to ipdate this stoRy faster. Also will kaiN be able to ascend aS a God for Not only his 3 different magic types but also for his warrior cultivation. Really excited for how this is going to turn out. stick with It and hopefully uou can get this bad boy Up to 1000 chaptErs on webnovel

This Novel ended too soon, nonetheless it a great Novel to read, As it definitely unique and something that I haven't read before and Love, I just wish it didn't end so soon.

honestly i really liked the world building (im not good at english so spare me). it's kinda rushed from chapter 1 but i have no problem with it, and im saying again that i liked the world building because we can see that there are lot's of genius out there and every character have their own past and present. and i liked the kain and arthur's friendship. so please author continue writing it.