Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia...""him/her" decide"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author notePlease avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)good base, develop it wellif you want an editor yeah i can do someThank youquality not badstability idek so 4development hasnt happeneddesign um yeahworld so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah