kingdom buildings always start off great but there's only so much you can do and invent without it feeling repetitive. not here yet, though. through his limited, but sizeable, upgrade points, mc has a limited window where he can change his empire massively with his system cheats and i like that he's going out the gates swinging. no rationing or hiding his powers but flaunting them from the beginning because appearances matter! there's an interesting dynamics between the mc and his subjects where there's some closeness in their interactions but also distance that one would expect between a ruler and his subjects.also, you can see the difference in background and status in how the characters talk to each other. those with noble titles tend to have their dialogues written out, while knights and dwarfs for example tend to shorten and combine their words how we usually do nowadays, yknow like don't, comin' etc. and it just gives a nice differenciation between the social statuses of the characters that a lot of authors tend to neglect a little.as for the grammar side of the novel, i'd say 99% great, with some words strangely written but those are few and far between.all in all, a story with promise that will keep you entertained. not on shadow slave or the one about a certain lord fool, but much better than most of the current WN line up. keep it up!
