Tribulation raptor - Reviews

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at first I was sure that this would be very interesting, but it's a shame that mc beta and being too honest about the system makes me feel that there is no interesting side of mc like its special system, mysteriousness because of the previous background then there is a dark tag, it feels very flat like this

You have to be kidding me? this is exactly tge format for a manga, the short dialogues, easy to understand, beautiful and an easy read! your other book is light novel, and this one is manga. you have to be an otaku like me, author-san! i love your works, just because it's my favorite genre. you have to tell me, are you an otaku? i'll go ahead and bet that you are too. i love your works.

I'm only 2 chapters in and the author NEEDS TO FIX the jumping back and forth between genders is the mc a guy? or a girl? it switches so much it gets very confusing and it's not just mc the side charater it happens as well, if you translating plz make sure you are going back and fixing any issues that occurs being posting

"Staff!" A magical wand appeared in her hand. The girl hit the ground with it three times. Each time the wand hit the ground an unknown energy was being gathered around her making the ground resonate together with it.

She dragged me down the hall. The seemingly elegant click of heels were banging against the floor thunderously.

"Well I will see to it in the next BASKETBALL class. Oh it's today after the conference!!" comments Alex.

"But its 6am!" I whined "plus, there are some things that I should try and manage" I said through gritted teeth.

Guys currently my exams are going on so i ki8nda can’t focus but i will be taking your suggestions

Good work author keep it up,i think this story has potential but there are too few chapters to judge so if author keeps up this quality I will increase the Rating ☺️