Trapped On A Death World - Reviews

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Hey this is to put me over.  Hope you enjoy my story.  
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interesting story, with a mc, that at least for now not super powerful, which is appreciated, because otherwise it would only be boring, which is appreciated. Yes, the females of the harem are not human. (girls with octopus faces, or aranachet ...) So I do not expect, that finds ecchi scenes, not even less +18

the beginning is pretty bad, you have no idea what is happening, the mind picture is unclear, overall bad beginning
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2 Preach the word; be prepared in season and out of season; correct, rebuke and encourage—with great patience and careful instruction. 3 For the time will come when people will not put up with sound doctrine. Instead, to suit their own desires, they will gather around them a great number of teachers to say what their itching ears want to hear. 4 They will turn their ears away from the truth and turn aside to myths. 5 But you, keep your head in all situations, endure hardship, do the work of an evangelist, discharge all the duties of your ministry.

so far the chareters are quit different. they are all supposed to be the evil type monsters that the hero is supposed to fight but you see life from there side.

I like the change up from the normal storylines. I feel for him as an AI, I would probably have the same issues if I was an AI.
The flow and actions from one chapter to the next make it hard to stop reading. I ran across a couple minor grammar errors, but nothing to distract from the story.

An intriguing and catchy title! :) Big plus for that :)
There are a lot of fanasty on WebNovel. It is not easy to create someting new, original and different... so I wish you a lot of crazy ideas! :)
I read your story with pleasure :)  The plot is captivating and characters are expressive. There are also interseting descriptions.
All the best! Keep writing!

The story is intriguing and the world background is well designed. The story development is smooth. I hope to read many more chapters in the future. Happy writing!

A scarce goodie. A rare find in the web novels repertoire of works. I'll lurk in the darkness and strike from time to time to binge new chappies. Please keep it up. May the author write more, edit more, learn more, and even earn more.

Premise is interesting and the characters are well described and written. Though there's some grammatical errors, the flow of the story is good. I wish you the best on your book author

Aside from a few grammatical errors which could easily be overlooked, this story is of much higher quality than many you can find on WebNovel. I enjoy the blend of Sci-Fi and Fantasy, with youkai (I think that was a youkai) and AI all presenting in the first chapter.

Keep up the good work, and I believe you'll excel in no time, Author!♥