Transmitted as the antagonist - Reviews

well what i can say.author whatever he say or other people this is very good novel.i highly recommend reading this if you like apocalipse with system.

Really good novel.Its extremely different from the usual cliched novels which have same repeating plots. If I had to compare it to some novel, it would be Lord of The Mysteries and My House of Horror. MC is not a 'Hero' prototype but a realistic person who has slight (just a little bit)antihero qualities.Just give it a go. I had no expectations from the synopsis and cover but still Its a unique piece of work which just sucks you into its universe.

this isn't the right novel to the title I came to take a look at this novel as it had looked interesting only to get a random novel. I've actually seen a novel which has the exact same start where mc becomes a dragon and all that as well as the whole hint system thing telling him which portal to go into at the start I can't remember the name of the other novel though

Don’t lie. We’re all here to live our Pokémon fantasies. Pokémon Go didn’t work out, so now we’re here at this novel that seems to have Pokémon elements. ...Hopefully this novel is good though. We all love a good reading experience ? (*COUGH -insert some novels-)

if you're gonna incorporate a dual cultivation system in your novel, at the very least put it in the synopsis. thank god at the very least you put it on the 1st chapter so i could immediately drop this

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can feel potential .. could be better .. but like the idea . .... . ...............................................................................................

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Just start Reading for the free chaptersso far the story is good, simple, and unique. I keep thinking female protagonist ability just like someone from My Hero Academia.

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Plenty of good ideas but idk why you decided to suddenly add 10 different cliches in 5chapters. The whole birthday party and pirate part is full of absurd situations brought by stupid decisions and extremely unlikely scenarios. Suspension of disbelief can only take us so far.The main problem is how scatered everything is. The MC is juggling twenty different things at the same time, both women and classes.I know I wrote more about the problems than the qualities but both the power and the world itself is pretty cool and interesting. Idk if the arena thing is common but it’s the first time I’m seeing it and it’s creative.

At first i wanted to know if Mr.lo*** was a character the protagonist created and as i read i got fascinated about the whole chemistry between The Cart***nist and the cart**n he has written about . The realistic connection between them is something admirable. The plot is well thought out and the picture created is undeniably beautiful.  A great read.