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Completed the whole thing! My thoughts are... well, quite intricate. But I enjoyed it, 8 out of 10! The female lead (FL) has a distinctiveness. She's, eh, let's call it shamelessly determined. She pours her heart into pretending to be a guy, even when it lands her in awkward spots; she keeps pushing forward. Thankfully, it often works out for her! Unfortunately, we readers endure the emotional turmoil alongside her... (lots of it)
The male lead (ML) seems cool and composed, but there are moments where he displays a surprising purity, almost naively so. Perhaps that's how the future villainous version of him turned so... twisted, like a contrast between black ink on white paper. He discovers her real gender around... oh, about 70% into the story (I'm referring to chapter 180 out of 251 on the website I read). Before that, there's a fair share of panic from his side. He was actually a bit disappointed when he found out, as all his efforts seemed wasted, hehe.
However, there's a word of caution: the narrative includes some harsh scenes, possibly adhering to the original horror story theme. There's a particularly disturbing incident involving a child ghost and the FL's family. Both situations are truly distressing. Additionally, there's some societal prejudice against LGBTQ+ issues, but it's addressed relatively well, so no need to worry too much.
Despite these elements, the connection between the FL, ML, and other characters (including the original ones) makes the story worthwhile. Initially, I didn't care for them, but they gradually grew on me, like a fungus, and before I knew it, I felt invested in their journey. So, overall, the writing is decent, the pacing is good except for the rushed ending, and the characters are endearing. Give it a read if you can!