TRANSMIGRATED TO THE CULTIVATION WORLD WITH A PROFICIENCY SYSTEM - Reviews

Another great novel added this week, but also has a different name. Some of you might recognize the name Full Attribute Martial Arts or All Attributes Martial Path. On a side note, I'm starting to think these translators do their best to change the real name so that we can't find the raws. No matter how odd these newly changed names seem.

World building takes time and effort, something the author clearly did not want to do.If there was a negative star rating for totally failing as an author this one would deserve it.

The story has a promising premise. Down the road, I noticed there were too many abrupt time-skips in a single chapter. While this is inevitable, please consider a time-skip once every other chapter or so if necessary and use the chance to elaborate more about characters. Settling that aside, as other had pointed out, there are grammatical errors, incorrect uses of punctuation marks and chopped sentences. I'd suggest getting an editor to help you with this issue and you could focus more on fleshing out your main plot.

One of the most intriguing books I came across here. You just can't put it down once you start reading. Greatcharacter building, smooth descriptions and the plot has a nice feel to it. Everything fits like a clockwork and the narrative is sleek. Going to its well earned place in my library, I will definitely be returning to read more. Please keep writing!

I love how greek mythology is incorporated into the story. Greek mythology in itself is already a great piece of art, so I like how the author blends his idea with it. I've seen some grammatical errors here and there, but we all make mistakes so that's not that big of an issue. Keep the good work up author!

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it's been interesting so far keep it up author

'Any further growth in my combat prowess without using my bloodline or the Divinity would be excruciatingly slow', thought Karna.

A lady with a hanger full of clothing came in and 2 others with breakfast. I feel like royalty.

'Yeah,' I thought to myself. 'A nonviolent resolution is definitely the best option.'

Keemstar

-Age: 17