Author san does warn you to read this at your own risk as their novel is not perfect. To clarify, the writing is peppered with irritating grammatical errors; for example a consistent lack of capital letters at the beginning of many sentences and even some of the proper nouns. There are other problems with syntax that would make readers who appreciate grammatically sound writing find this narrative bothersome. I wanted to edit it more than read it ? It’s a shame given that the plot sounded interesting and you can see the potential of the story.