Transmigrated as the Narrator of a Danmei Novel - Reviews

it's the twice royal ships and jenlisa and chaesoo. not to mention seulrene too!

??                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           ?                                                                                                            

typical system face slap novel. i wouldnt even have so much problem with "passive" system if the first skill that he gained wasnt ACTIVE... overall stupid mc, some comedy but everything is more or less copy pasted from x(x→∞) other similar novels.

Absolutely fantastic book! It has everything, cultivation, different worlds, an OP MC, interesting setting, a bit comedy, romance, good detailed fights and much more.The MC doesn't has a chat-like cultivation or absurd abilities, which would allow him to be the overlord everywhere. He only has his 'mad' training and his heaven defying talent (something has to make him the MC^^).The story doesn't seem to have so many different confusing realms, which MC will have to climb one after another and when he becomes the best of one realm there doesn't appear out of blue a new realm. The different worlds where quite soon introduced and it didn't change, yet^^.Of course the MC is absolute OP (but that is what we expect^^), but his power is ... coherent?^^ without too much of face slapping or wrong placed arrogance.The development of the story is understandable, makes sense and really enjoyable.An another point is the romance, there is no harem, but only one female 'MC', which isn't just a doll or just a side character. Of course the MC has much more screen time but it's still alright. By the way, a really good thing is that in this book the author breaks boring cliches about the heroine, which I really hated.There is much more to write about this book, but time and space is in this moment limited, so my advice is, just read it!

um author I think 11 months waiting is far more than many readers can get patient I mean if the novel is not to your expectations I don't know but as a reader who read the 801 chapters you mustn't Leave it like this it doesn't deserve it

EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP.

???-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Moar!                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 

The protagonist is a novelty and the supporting characters are being developed well. The unique strength increasing methods are also interesting. I also like how the protagonist doesn’t get cheat but has to rely on intelligence and effort just like the rest of the planet

Clarity your writing needs Clarity. You have major show vs tell problems. Your dialogue needs work too. Trust me I've been there practice engaging the senses and inner thought and the story will shine

This novel had a lot of potential when it started out. Unfortunately the author seems to have gotten bored early in and do the concept fell into random chapters of disconnected story arcs for no apparent reason. Left one with a feeling of the whole thing being extremely forced. Lacks proper planning and development needed to hold an audience.

This book is really intense and boosted my level of imagination. The plot, setting and even the characters are so amazing and I must say Kudos to the author. Please keep up the good work???