Transcendent Gene - Reviews

The best cultivation novel that I've read so far?

No modern setting novel have been chosen in a long time so hope this or the body swap novel get will get chosen. So the MC get a system and he can get money through breathing or some task. He can lvl up the system through spending money which will give him more money each breath. He can also gain abilities through doing normal life stuff like eating or sleeping.The MC will get cooler. At the beginning it might not seem like it but later on he bought an item through the system that make him more mature. Not 100% sure if this is a harem novel, it will probably be a harem which is quite sad(for me) but I can deal with it.The novel is probably not for people who look for every mistake or bad thing about the novel. There are stuff that doesn’t make sense like how did the system appear out of nowhere? Or how the MC doesn’t act like how a normal person would react if they got a system.

good and perfect story which leads to a new journeys.every person wants this type super power so that he take vies of every person and teach to wrong

It is your typical trash story!!!10/10 plz give moar chapsIt is vrmmorpg so it automatically gets 4/5 stars and I haven’t noticed any large problems yet so 5/5

I very much like this one I really hope it gets picked up at some point in the future I would really like to continue the story plus I really like the authors of the work.

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i love this kind of story, the plot and twist is good. just hoping that this will be finished. i really like your writing style. even the sequencing of events from TAP until here in GNG.

I am shocked that this novel is so highly rated despite the serious inconsistencies. In the first chapter, it is explicitly stated “Both Garen and his sister were born with dark purple hair and eyes the color of wine. Their hair color was passed down from their father and eye color from their mother”. But out of nowhere in chapter 10, they become step siblings who don’t share a drop of blood. I imagine that the author’s world defies the notion of heredity. This stood out since it’s right at the beginning of the novel. There are many more if readers pay attention that just takes away the joy of reading.

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I shall be honest this was difficult to actually read due to the grammar errors but as that was already covered I shall move on. Whilst I am no writer myself I shall give you some of my thoughts. Try to be more consistent with numbers you start with mid 2500-2627 then you state the exact range 2580-2627 (which is late 2500's not middle). Also use the units of measure for example years. " and it was technology from 2600." could be and it was technology from the year 2600. or it was technology from the 27th century. It helps clarify when you have multiple unit types. examples are stats, damage or time.To help with grammar you could try "Grammarly" I have not used it myself but its supposed to be free so at worst you decide it doesn't suit you. Let me know if this helped ill check it again in a few days and see how the story is going.

"..." Upon seeing the object in question, he too was a loss for words. How in the world did this get in here? The man thought. It was simply impossible to enter these chambers, even they had to use special means to enter here.

     There was a silence in the air as Jazmin processed the news she had just received. Having gotten up in mid story Kodi walked back into the living room with a bowl of grapes and a plate of cheese crackers. She takes her seat one more time and waits for Jazmin to get out of her head.