Traces of the Mortal Immortal - Reviews

Soccer novels are great! Systems that aren't completely ridiculous are great! Fun novel in general. (Word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler word filler)

i thought fan-fic is hard to get through webnovel's system, because of copyright issues, i think this is the first one that should be a fan fic in here(released by webnovel), just based on similarities on OPM, like the training and balding stuff.Idk what to expect, but we'll see if this can really reach trial read or the Editor's not paying attention.

MC to naive and simple minded, he should ask for every information related everything he needs in detail. It should make the story more interesting if MC is clever, cool, calm, and confident..

Well Rai was in a forest full of dangerous beasts and fauna...

ming yu finished cooking round 2, the stranger grabbed a fish and was about to bite into it when The fish disappeared from his hands and heard a "plop" he looked across from him and saw a guy staring at him and took a bite of the fish. Ming yu just started laughing. The stranger looked confused at them.

Hi this is Author. Please let me know if you want this novel to go a certain route for example-the protagonist gose rogue like Sasuke or Stays faithful to the village etc. Needless to say it cannot be a harem .

TheGate of Wonder(驚門,Kyōmon,English TV:The Gate of Shock), located below the stomach, further increases the user's speed and power. Only after this gate is activated can a capable user perform theDaytime Tiger. Those who open this gate will secrete glowing green — blue in the anime — sweat from every inch of their body which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people mistake as a chakra coating. Unfortunately, the side effects of opening the gate are that the user's muscle fibres are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches them.

"baiklah kalau begitu bg win,, mkasih ya udh mau bantu Rena,, semoga aja anak bamg erwin gak kesusahan nantinya pas mau sekolah seperti Rena"

Would have been great if the author was someone else. The story has potential but is horribly rushed by the author. The grammar is awful and confusing. Half the time you don’t know who’s talking because there are no clues. The mc himself seems really dumb and useless. The whole story is trash and although I get what the author is trying to do it’s poorly executed.

I'll start by apologizing to all those who read Legendary Guardians; Mad Emperor. I stopped a few chapters in because I don't like the MC; he doesn't reflect who I am.If, sometime later, you guys decide you want me to continue, I'll do so.