Touch Down - Reviews

It's perpetually bracing to be your number 1 advocate in everything because if you don't start it, no one can read it, right?!This novel is the ultimate fantasy for a man; there is a test of patience initially, but after that, the story becomes the ULTIMATE FANTASY.To Readers, you are free to give your most critical and best reviews.

Hello, readers. This is an entry for WPC #194 themed Superhumans. I hope you can support it.There are some dark tones but not too dark - also, no NTR... just saying.Thanks!

This really needs to get picked up.This really needs to get picked up.This really needs to get picked up.This really needs to get picked up.

Another Evil Wuxia type novel.It is the same kind of novel where Mc will fight continously and the world background is completely ignored. Nothing new but I got the same feeling as Reverend  Insanity.

hmmm... kinda plain if i were to compare it to debut or die. there is nothing in particular that excites me. the story has a very serious intonation, and there is little to no conflict. if i were to summarise the first 30 ch, it'd be "he woke up from coma, went to an audition, got rejected but......" exactly that, but with many more sentences in between. in debut or die, there are paragraphs that you just simply cannot forget, like sometimes you'd feel like reading that particular part again. this one doesn't have that charm.

Author here! I appreciate you taking the time to check out the story. Here's hoping that some other people are inspired by the story, for whatever reason, to write similar ones. Take care!

I assume this is a ff of ready player one so this has to be good (You know how it is) ............   .... . . . . .. . .      . .. . . . ... .. . . .. . . . .. . . . .  . .. . .. . . . .

Apart from a few grammatical errors, I have to say that the story so far is hilarious and intriguing in my opinion. The characters remind me of an anime where the mc shouted a lot but is still extremely loveable. Although it's still in it's begining stages, I think this story has the potential to make it big (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)

It's a good story but the pace is TOO FAST!?Like, "Wait what? What happened again?" There's no time for readers to digest what's happening and the characters lack reaction (e.g. When the co-worker saw his new car or when the boss got pointed a gun and blackmailed)Also, you have a lot of mistakes with a & an, now & know as well as to & too... It would be great if you could separate the conversation into different paragraphs:I said, "...." My boss, "..." exclaimed. Something like that... I hope this helps your group... -from Originals Author Society

Was thinking of not reading since the book can easily be drop like the last son of terra and the others. he gets you excited and dump you

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