Top-tier Unruly Master - Reviews

Absolutely love this, and I cant wait too see more of Lin Wu in Walker of the Worlds!

255 chapter reviewtldr: Good comedy but butcher by side character Su Changyu full of cringe and tasteless joke and poor execution of misunderstanding type of joke. Ever seen a good comedy book? Problem with being a comedy genre is that it takes skill to wring to cover hundred of chapter. The author do in fact have the skill by making the mc misunderstanding funnier, like Saitama. Problem is, author have the bad taste of putting side character in the same spot. The side character misunderstanding bring people to annoying phase, its not even funny and cringe. With copy and paste word of he just stand there, menancingly and all the daoist scare shitless. 1-2 chapter is ok, but when u even go to the extreme and have dozen of chapter dedicated to him, and still act the cringe way? That drop the quality for me. Also, the author keep repeating how he is more handsome than anyone, like i get it, u are handsome than mc, but stop saying that word every time u appear on the chapter. The side character also have the most fkin plot armor i ever seen, Even Yun Che have to salute him and call him as Father or senior brother. He is given  fruit that can skip his cultivation by 500 year worth of training, and suddenly he become perfect with perfect cultivation when back then he stuck qi phase at late 20 age. The world background is average at best.  The fruit alone is just a fkin plot device.

it's an interesting novel but man you need to polish your own idea, it's okay if you want to take somethings for inspiration from other novel don't make it too much okay. Many of the plot comes from "Returning From the Immortal World" you can check the similarities, OP mc that betrayed and sent to earth ✓ intel organisation that mc want to destroy ✓ making money through auction✓ rare immortal herb that common in earth that very very useful for mc and harem ✓ mc building his army from orphan to takes revenge in the immortal world✓I hope you make a plot that truly yours and signature your novel.

Only got a few chapters in so the high ratings on updating stability and world background are just me giving author the benefit of the doubt. Concept itself, while not necessarily original, is good. But 1) the grammar and writing style (author "mysteriously" leaving out stuff in an to me really annoying way, like there is no motivation for stuff more then whether it is convenient for author or not) are horrible. And 2) characters feel really flat, no realistic emotions from mc. I would give it another try if it was editet to flow better though.

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