Writing Quality: 3/5
Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording.
Updating Stability: 5/5
I put everyone's like this.
Story Development: 4/5
The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving.
Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing)
I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue.
World Background: 4/5
I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world.
In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.
