Through The Veil - Reviews

While I understand this is a debut novel, this work has real, glaring weaknesses.  The writing has been atrocious.  I strongly recommend copy/paste each chapter onto grammarly.com website and republish the chapters.  The theme of the story revolves around a cheat system that allows the MC to become very OP very quickly.  While God-mode can be fun to read, it becomes boring when the MC cannot be seriously challenged by a nemesis or villain.  A person develops his character through failures and setbacks.  There is none of that in this story.  As a result, the story has become stale and boring.  And thus, C61 is a good place for me to drop this novel.

I liked the novel first chapter had a good hook. Keep writing and improving good luck...................................................................

I can't stop grinning when I'm reading this novel. It was captivating from the start and only gets better. It's been added to my daily reading list for a week now and hasn't disappointed.

I don't get why this book is rated so highly. I wouldn't waste your time, it's racist af as others have mentioned and the mc is a beta. One thing that pisses me off is that the female lead isn't fierce... she is an absolute raging btch. Like there is a difference in the two that the author seems to not know. It was fine when she didn't submit etc bit stupid but yeah. Then it went through the whole faze of them getting closer and It would have been cool af if they grew up like a prober fam. So she and the mc with acc love getting stronger in that time with the kids. But instead she "awakens" This completely destroys the story and it goes downhill that doesn't stop. I'm surprised how fast it crashed and burned... I mean nobody wants to read a story where the main character is a btch. Like I said before the author can't seem to tell the difference and thinks fierce translates to arrogance, btch, and literally all them shtty character traits. SO yeah don't waste your time. Unless you like the character I described which I am shocked if you do but yeah...

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starting with the lowest statswith customized plot armor system of the godly tier mc is aiming to bcm the evil god since there is a sword and magic tag imagine a spider using half his legs to use magic and half of them to use swords

Let’s give it a test run and then I’ll come back to update this ✌?~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~?

There is full *** stuffs but the idea of empath and business in the culivator world is interesting to read.Updates are also quick.I hope the author does not drop it.

Nice nice nice nice nice Vince nice nice nice

For he has seen an emotion quite like theirs. It was like from the little goblins that he had slain back when he 'dreamt' of the future.

Helen nimbly stood up as she ran within this sloppy grounds barefooted... away from the Church, both of them had died but were given the opportunity to live once more... It would be a waste to be caught again... and be pinned down by some false accusation...

"You are a God of War." Ares spoke as if he was stating a fact.