This book is unique in its right. What I admire the most is the eccentric writing which I noticed since its in stark contrast to mine.
Writing Quality: Its great. I find myself able to follow the story and even the more specialised terminology well because its presented quite well.
Character Design: I sorta feel that it's lacking a bit, not in the sense of development but purely design. I'm heavily biased towards visualising my characters and I feel like I don't get enough of that.
Story Development: it kinda stunted for him in some of the chapters, but then went back to a great flow. Overall its good.
World Background: As far as I've read is great and keeps building up with the mechanics as well.
Overall great story that I recommend to readers.