The World They Left Behind - Reviews

Loved it. Definitely a great read and book. Definitely would make a great series book.

I am tired of this novelI gave it a lot of time but it still is the same - repetitive - generic like hell- I want to say one-legged chicken but it is more like one-legged elephanthe has this system which he can basically plagiarize anything and could be famous but he chooses to stay in China -.-'- he is an a*shole with women...- a world filled with 1D villains - stupid one directional story progress - no innovation - terrible amount of sheepish fans which love face smacking - I think translating this novel is a wasted effort

Hello dear readers,I wanted to write a comment after 3 years to update y'all on things that have happened and why I decided to stop progressing with this novel.When I started this novel I was going into high school and wanted to do this as a side project to hopefully earn money (which didn't work out). By the time I got to around 30 chapters in I was losing interest in being an author because I had found a group of friends and most of my time was spent playing games and going through school. While I have graduated high school; I don't believe that I will have the free time with the upcoming semester of college. Maybe one day I will pick it back up and be able to write a grand story for you dear readers, but I'll be going through rigorous classes at college while I pursue a Bachelors in Computer Science and won't have time since I'll be preoccupied with studying and the gym.I'm sorry to have let y'all down and hopefully can understand my situation. I appreciate the kind comments on some chapters that I've received over the years and I hope that y'all go on to do some amazing things. Just remember to keep your head up and follow your heart.With love, "Devouring Immortal's" Author.

A lovely and smooth-flowing read with no clichés, well, except for reincarnation. The story is stable, the magic theories are well thought out, and the protagonist is growing up fine. Most importantly, there are no arrogant young masters (at least for now).My only complain is the shortage of chapters. How can 39 chapters satisfy me? At least 150 chapters are needed for a mouthful in one setting!

This is a great read. New concept. Great plotting skills. Immersive narration and creative use of powers.P.S. If I was the mc I would have asked the best use of the power.

Honestly, I love the ingenuity and newness of your storyline. It’s like a fresh, fantasical take on very familiar issues and it makes it easier to relate with the characters. I like the pacing and your overall tone and delivery, but I think you need to work a bit on your grammar construction and punctuation. Asides from that, this is a truly promising story and I think you’re doing an amazing job!

Quite interesting, but the depiction of the characters in my opinion is quite lacking. Stay positive...................................................................

Currently, I am with Hermoine sitting crossed leg meditating. I managed to coax her to join me in the morning practice since she only repeats the books she has already read. "How long are we going to sit here doing nothing - it is practically a waste of time that I could've used reading more books"

Bai Heng threw the red sword to the Pavilion Representative who caught it in a daze.

"dek..... Rafa barusan telepon aku ?"

She didn't know what she would do the next time she saw either Kay, or Shirou. Sir Ector was out of the question as he was already growing old, but those two? Oh, she could come up with something. Many things.

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