The White Rose: A Killer's Rebirth - Reviews

Another cuckold protagonist. He is incredibly pathetic and subservient to women. It's as if the author not only enjoys but even yearns for humiliation. The MC likes to be taken advantage of. The translation is not good, if it's even translation and not an MTL. The family aspect of the story sucks. So much unnecessary baggage and so many cliche plotlines because of it. It would have been infinitely better if he was solo.

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As other reviewers have pointed out, this story nabbed the title and synopsis from 重生红龙:自律就变强 but has a completely different plot from that. There's no "translating" being done here for a Chinese novel of that name.Story itself, while having noticeable inconsistencies, is still decent. I don't particularly dislike the story so far. But the title and synopsis having absolutely no correlation with how the story is progressing is kinda bothersome. Masquerading as a translation of a novel instead of just posting this as an original story seems suspicious.

I'm sure if I just missed it but there's no going into the game or anything.. I found the writing close together and tbh I got confused really fast. Some words like evident are overused, like in the very first paragraph of the first chapter. The characters are very unique and development is ok. I recommend hiring an editor because I see a lot of well.. grammar errors, etc. Keep writing though, your creative expression is a very healthy habit!

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A novel for a true pussy, for a true wuss. The MC can not even be considered to be a man. Damn, the plot is good but why make the MC like that? A cock-tease and a pussy. Nice writing by the way but wrong character development. Making an R-18 novel and perverted MC with no dick.

I am very glad that I gave this story a read. The author did such a fabulous job on this story  The characters were all unique in their own way and you got to know each one of their personalities and story in such a way that it was not overwhelming. I loved the way the storyline developed. Fantastic read. I will be searching for more from this author.

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I didn't catch on all the chapters but I already wanted to write a review.First of all, we have a very complex word built in the novel, starting from the divine instead of rock bottom but with a nice twist to the plot. There are actually three protagonists but the author does fine work switching from one to the other.I especially enjoy all the world descriptions.It's a cultivation novel that I believe, even if one did not read other cultivation stories they would still be able to understand what's happening.

I'm going to take the 100th review. Thanks to all who read and support the Incubus System. This is my first harem novel with a modern fantasy theme and I love it. I mixed the demon world with the modern human world and made the MC like living in two worlds. I make him fight, have fun with his friends, go to collage and a lot of ... (you can read from the synopsis). This novel will also take the theme of character development, weak to strong and a complicated plot that will more clearer over time. This book will be updated every 4 times / week. Every Thursday to Sunday. Hope you enjoy ~

Peak History fanfic, just the names are sometimes a little bit of a mess

'Let's see, I have now quiet the number of them, I hope they taste good.'