The Whispering City of Eldrid - Reviews

I like the book But im mad at the author for the direction of how the book is going. i also like how renee is a very good mom and that she would do anything to protect christian.

I’ll see how this series is………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..………………………………………..

It’s amazing!! The character development and the pace of the story are very good. The story in itself is incredible. A few grammar errors here and there but otherwise it’s one of my favorite stories rn. Keep it up Author-san!!

.                                                                                                                                           I love it

Nice Book Name, Nice Book Cover.Great plot, nice character. Everything about the book is good except for one thing. Your grammar! the poor grammar usage will make your book lose its potential. If you find it hard, use Grammarly. It'll help you a lot, another piece of advice, read books, don't just focus on writing, read more so you will have to compare their writing skills to yours, that way you'll know where you are lacking behind and then correct yourself.Good luck with your writing.

Dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped dont be dropped

Don't make a novel about a vampire if he's not going to act like a vampire.Within the first 19 chapters he already obtained the ability to withstand sunlight and gains the same disposition [skin type] as humans.Another thing is that it all seems too easy for him. He literally starts off finding high-tier chests easily inside the Count's mansion, and later on they all become super convenient ways of strengthening himself or giving him exactly what he needs in his situation. Overall, if you wanna see a vampire act like a human and get protected by "legitimate" plot armor in the form of treasure chests then you'll like this.

From what i’ve seen its really good. You should really continue with this.                                                                  

I can't believe how much I love this story, I mean its such a fun take on a VRMMO.  The MC and 7 others become the villains of a brand new VRMMO, unbeknownst to the rest of the player base who all think they're up against advanced AI's.  I'm really enjoying reading about these 8 completely stomping an entire literal player base.  Another plus is the romance, the MC's backstory is that he is married to the other 7 in game, and we get to watch as their relationships bloom both in game and in real life.

"aku sempat mengira kakak nggak punya pacar lo karena setahu aku kakak kan orangnya sibuk"

"Yeah, nothing serious, by the way, what happened yesterday? for some reason, I can't recall anything."

"Hm?" Xinyu eyed the girl incredulously before she disappeared from her peripheral view.