*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism: I suggest keeping the lengths of your chapters from 1k-2k words each due to that being what's most liked on this site, though the story isn't lacking in my mind, I feel that the first 5 chapters are likely a bit on the short side. Also, for the last two chapters you have gaps of time that you did not explain to us that you would have ahead of time, this will reduce your score in stability of updates, I suggest you try to keep updates more regular, or to let us know what we should expect as far as when new updates will occur. Positive feedback: You had stable updates for all but the last two chapters, and you did well in all other arias of this novel... keep up the good work.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue to read this novel at a later date.;,;.Score: WQ&SoU 4/5 SD,CD,&WB 5/5