The Watcher in the Cornfield - Reviews

This story is draggy now.. not exciting anymore

Brain Dead Mc to protect plot CheckStupid Coincidences to protect plot CheckPlot Armor CheckTo protect the stupidly designed plot, the author makes MC takes the most stupid decisions. It is one of the worst Chinese Web novels I have ever read. The "Original" structure is somehow interesting, other than that it is rubbish. I read 600 some chapters and I regret terribly. Author forgots what had he wrote in one chapter before, no flow, no cohesion. Fence Sitters are brain deader than the Mc. They talk rubbish to show Mc strong, cool and intersting, but in reality Mc is just that. Read with caution.

One of my favorite books, just finished rereading it again. it would be really cool to see someone make this into a manga

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No researching at all. The Author give numerous misinformation both in term of geography and history. Plots have so many hole in it while rationality in the novel is minimal. It is becoming much more racist in the upcoming chapters and turning into something disgustingly awful.

This story would be an absolute gem if the author kept the story in third person. using dialogue between characters for character and plot development. Needs a proofreader and editor to help fix grammar writing style consistency .

Its not my cup of tea, but from my personal experience. It seems like the Male lead is grooming Female lead for sexual abuse and mental abuse because he has blackmailed her to do whatever he wants, like being his girlfriend and a few other times forcefully try or did get sexual gain. But since its a fantasy novel, am not going to take it too personally and thats why i said its not my cup of tea.

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Finished talking, he sent Brittany a message. "Hey, this is Frank, the real Frank. Earlier Billy stole my phone and was messing around. I hope you're alright. Take care of yourself, goodnight."

Alex makes a perfect French braid out of my waist length bulky hair. Trust me, out of all things I am proud of, my hair ranks the first.