The War Room - Reviews

does the author plan to continue this story? from what I've read so far it has a very interesting plot line. I'd be very interested to continue reading whatever the author puts out there for this story. so far it is very entertaining. LOLPLEASE continue this story. I'd be more than happy to support the continuation of this story if the author continues.

Trash absolutely trash Don't even waste your time reading this and save your brain cells..................................................

this story is best . the best slice of life , well written story, the background setting is well thought ......... .............................. .................................... .........................................

I may be wrong but It's like a Death game or Squid game theme.. But I know it will be a different plot and a nice story shall keep me hooked.The Story: √The writing style: √The Character: √It may not be the best but It could turn out great! I will be back on this novel and waiting for the next chapter!Keep out the great work, Mr. Author-san?

the number of inconsistencies is unbearable, the same ones found in all the most cliché isekai stories make me say that the story is nothing special in any case my suspension of disbelief was broken very quickly

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guys this is a hot potato, once the mc tries to get spiritual energy back on earth with the help of the chinese government, well lets just say that people will be distinguished by their ethnicity and where they live.

(not a very proper review, just my thoughts)So far I'm liking the story, the punctuation is sometimes a bit off like there are sometimes runoff sentences and no commas where there should be. And the 'I' is written as 'i' but that's just me being nitpicky.In one of the later chapters, there's a repeating (whywhywhywhywhy, etc) and I feel like there's too much? I had to scroll down for so long ahThe story is good but there's not enough world-building. If there were more then that would be great.Not sure what it meant by using 'half his powers' though?Also when MC dies, he meets this guy asking for help and accepts it? Not sure why he did and is not at least a bit freaked out.There's a chapter with character info on it, but I feel like it spoils the story a little. I would have just put in the characters that were already introduced in the story rather than just say, hey, this is the ML and the MC and the villain, they like this stuff and hate that stuff.Though I hope author-sama updates this :)

"I don't know. Actually, their closeness gives me goose bumps. It doesn't feel right."

He's fingers sent a final message and he slide it in his pocket as he rose and walked toward her. He stopped in front of her so they stared at each other.

-once she realized how convoluted Amirah actually was.

"Do-don't come near me, You filthy creature! I will have you arrested for assaulting a ministry official!" She shouted as she stumbled backwards. She looked nervous. She tried to apparate out of the house but couldn't. Micasa had already put up Anti-apparition field around the house.