The Villain's Second Timeline - Reviews

i hope we are getting to the end of the book.

(Will alter if needed)This story idea seems a little stupid. I'm desperate so I'll try it but if I don't follow up it wasn't good.. . . . . .

Loving the novel so far... Good to see the MC embrace a unique cultivation usually reserved for minor characters... Hope he adopts a unique fighting style not the common ones (swords, spears, daggers & bows)... That would increase its uniqueness and make the MC a bit unique..

at chapter 4 you can drop this fanfic right away.................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I really enjoyed reading this book but it's a shame that it will never be completed by the person who wrote it ???????????????????

All hail the lord... KHAOS itself. The very first chapter catches the mind of the reader. If you like books with non-human mc then you should definitely give it a try, and if you like system novel though it's not your stereotype ones... it's a good choice to give a try.Good luck Khaos for the book.

interesting story so far wonder if he will go back to his world with the dwarven system at some point his mother deserves something for all the trouble she went through him with a system to take care of her would be good and he did just die again as a dwarf

She explained further that although her eyes were open like a normal person, no stimuli could trigger her reaction.

"Yeah. I agree…. It doesn't feel right."

With a huff and a quick straightening of his jacket, he looked around for the vampire.

Name: Gordon

while checking the area in his balcony he saw a weirs looking arcade across his street, it was full of neon lights and had a big sign, "New Game" the sign was lit up and quite an eye catcher so Dylan decided to go there and with great awe and astonishment he was captivated by the environment that coated him.