I don't see why so many people dislike this story. Maybe my taste in light novels is weird, maybe my criticizing side is lenient, but I've enjoyed this story very much. Its a shame there's only 40 chapters.
The synopsis is quite interesting, and the storyline is quite interesting. However, a lot of editing is needed when it comes to grammar. Other than that, it is a well-written story.
Writing Quality: 4* EnjoyableStability of Updates: 5* ExcellentStory Development: 4* I Like where it's goingCharacter Design: 4* I like how the characters look(through my imagination)World Background: 3* More will get revealed I hopeThe total score: 4.0*
"Jangan lakukan itu, Guru, aku tahu aku salah sebelumnya." wajah Fan Le segera berubah kecut, membuat Qin Wentian dan Mustang tertawa terbahak-bahak. Si Gendut ini, benar-benar tidak tahu malu.
"Wow, Thanks, I'm Kyoka Jiro, What's your name?" said the Girl, Introducing herself as Kyoka, "Josuke Higashikata, nice to meet you, well I better get going, don't want to miss out on the points" Josuke answered.
She finally heard him. He looked at her. "Since he was your lover, we thought it would be ok if you get his possessions. These include his own books excluding the ones about black magic."
