Terrible grammar. You need to edit your chapters, Or use a program to fix your grammar mistakes. No real world background. Pheonix empire? Dimension? No world? You said Pheonix Empire is a dimension? Did he destroy the whole Galaxy? Empire? World? The MC has never seen a genius like the one he currently possesses? He comes from a Celestial Empire. Also Is Willow State a villiage? State? City? According to you EVERYONE in Willow State knows him and he is well liked. While being a Mortal. I see that you mentioned that he lived in a City but never said the name of it or anything. You just said he is well liked by everyone in Willow State. Also how did Fenrir know that that was the same guy? If you reincarnate do you keep your old spirit if so how did he get a new one? Also many people don't know the secret of the two boulders but other people also tried it, does it mean they also meet the same spirit " Fenrir "? So just anyone grave robs people even level 7 cultivators lmao. Wang Xue wasn't even a cultivator. Seems like people are suprised over level 7 cultivators. I doubt the genius lover had anything good all they knew was that she had talent. MC breaks his morals and doesn't kill the girl. When did he pay 100 silver? It said that he paid 50 silver? He might be lying though but why would he lie to that girl. Also he let the girl stay in his room so much for a " Loner " " As this happens Wang Xue, who was hailed as the cruelest and bloody person in 3 dimensions. " " Everybody that had lost their lives in that world will not be able to find salvation and go through reincarnation, all of the souls that's present in the dimension when the cataclysm were all shattered whether it be those old monsters or the weak peasants' everyone was the same. " Yet he doesn't kill the girl. " Logic "
