The Veil of Destiny. - Reviews

wow this and ancestor above are definitely the best novels in this trial read and I hope they get picked even tho they probably won't be.?????

This was certainly something……. There were so many different issues. To list one of them. Author or translator was too lazy to figure out how western names are. They should have never translated the names. The naming sense is ridiculous “white Vivian”. Also this story is pretty confusing and the way people talk is extremely weird. This needs an editor.

Wow... I was skeptical at first, but this story is totally different. it's a unique sci-fi narrative with nemerous mind bending plot twists.Seriously, I had to keep going back to previous chapters just to make sure I'm following...

need more..... ...............??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Nodding silently, Jewel took a deep breath than exhaled calming herself before uttering, "Play message."

Ahh

"Nagisa"

He put his finger on my palm and it over my arm then shoulder then neckline a crease. For some people it may feel seductive but for me, it gave me goosebumps and run chills down my spine. He leans down and whispered in my ear.

He was dreaming, recovering, but most importantly, he was accepting. In his dream stood two women of different heights, one came up to his shoulder, the other reached his thigh. He couldn't recognize them at first, but soon, he remembered. They were his Wife and daughter. William reached out but couldn't touch them, they were just outside of his reach. His wife took his daughter's hand and turned around, headed into the distance.

Face to face with Deadpool's severed skull, Ethen is surprised to see and hear the already decaying mouth to be able to produce sounds. ''Never seen a talking skull, didn't you, brother?''

It's a fantastic feeling, a moments of seeing the human world.

Nice story, I like the pacing and the first chapter really seems very exciting. I like the character design though you could be more assertive on the use of some metaphors so that it makes the story more grand and have a gravitas. Thought the characters look really legendary. The development is good. Just be regular at updating, and you'll be good to go.