The cultivation in this novel follows the standard. Qi Gathering > Foundation Establishment > Ardorous Gold Core > Nascent Soul Stage > Immortal/deity. The protagonist reincarnated into the world from earth and spends hundreds of years cultivating to the core stage and then dying. He finds himself with a system but 'dead'. He uses his system to lead his clan to greatness. Good novel please support it.
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The human interaction is just a bit too forced and unrealistic, the author tries to push a forgiving naruto-esque kind of MC which is calm but it’s too rushed and it interrupts the immersion. I mean i threaten to kill you and insult the one family member you ever had and you forgive me in a jiffy? Not saying the MC has to be vengeful but at least make it realistic, drag it out a bit, hint at it initially and carefully build up to it rather than lazily skip to that point all of a sudden. We’re all humans and it makes no sense cause even the best of people would find it difficult to forgive that easily. Storyline seems good and your writing isn’t bad either but the MC keeps ruining the immersion. Good luck on your story mate✌?
I'm not a tech/futuristic nerd to comment on the AI setting story, but damn this story is worth it! Too bad it was too short. Funny, heart warming, ****** but loveable plot that made me smile in the end. Hopefully the author would write more in the future
Interesting plot and interesting characters. Readers can easily get connected with the story and characters. Over all its a good work and waiting for more. Good luck author??
The pixie had sky blue skin with purple eyes similar to Cindy's. "I've been here for a few years now.. When I first came here I was just like you. Screaming... Desperate to leave, but no one came."
Artorius drew his sword on the run, his eyes narrowing. In that one moment, they stopped being escaped slaves. They were attacking his citizens. They were enemies, armed enemies.
